26 Jan 13 2:47 pm Vote for my next poetry video
As some of you may know I write poetry. I have a youtube channel with over 100 videos of me performing my poems . My youtube channel is
http://www.youtube.com/user/TheIntoxikie?feature=mhee
Here's the deal I want people to read the 3 snippets below and tell me which one you like best.For the one that most people seem to prefer I will print off the full poem, record me performing it on my video camera and then upload the vid to my youtube channel TheIntoxikie.
Snippet 1. "Fuckland" written 29th August 2009
" We are the seven circles of society all caving in on ourselves, we came for food but there is not much meat left on the bones, we need to be taught but all the brains left, knowing their legacy would only be of the things they stood on & tried to break: still being intact, not of the things they stood for, but they have no feet so they just float away, to become lost undiscovered islands that the muscle & pretty skin will never inhabit,
We no longer sing we whistle, as if happiness is still here, smoke rises from the kettle like instruments we call mouths, the whistle: voice, the smoke: breath, we get the lense on our TV changed appropriately for our sight, as we wear them on our heads, changing the channel with magic markers to animate ourselves appropriately for the time of day, "
Snippet 2. "Can I Get A Moment Of Peace" written 17th February 2010
"Can I get a moment of peace,
for all the things
that died inside me,
maybe they’ll come back alive
& find me,
a bracelet of broken hearts
on my sleeve,
on the same arm that’s holds a shield,
I’m the cold breathe of the wind,
I’m your best forgotten friend,
I’m a lot of things,
I’m holdin a bag of weed,
you want some?
Because I could be a good guy
to smoke with,
living a life that I got no hope with,
feelings with a strong hold,
hard to cope with,
I try to fight back,
with a wish for a stronger grip
to choke with,
My tightened fist grows veiny,
fake & smiley face goes angry,
my twisted mind strains me,
so I get drunk,
to forget how fucked up I am,
come join me,
hold my hand,
I don’t think I’m bad,
I have no idea what I am.."
Snippet 3. "Stick Your Judgement Where It Belongs" written 22nd June 2009
"Stick your judgement where it belongs:
in the mirror,
eyes glazed raining with pain,
reflection of shame.
You sit there,
giving your ego the chair,
as that pride provides spite into your point of view,
but then you take sometime inside your mind,
thinking through,
breathing insults back in to find most land on you.
With mirrored mocking eyes
you find that the pity you place on people’s heads,
is the cracking depths of stress,
inside your chest,
without admittance you used denial
wiring through trial as you judge instead.
Through blurry crying vision
and running make up
you realize you’re a clown to,
opinion of self fades
as reflection blurs further,
realizing in the zeros of nobodies
they miscount you.
With false authority held in a name tag,
flashing orders around like a police badge,
until you’re finally snapped in two,
by a middle finger and a fuck you.
Just another shit in the heap,
no black in your wool
just another plain sheep.."
Comments (4)19 May 12 12:48 pm New Devious Minds song ET
My group Devious Minds have put a new song out, it's our version of ET (originally by Katy Perry and Kanye West) . To hear music go to our youtube channel at http://www.youtube.com/user/DeviousMindsTV
11 May 12 10:21 am Devious Minds music
Sup peeps !?
I'm doing a bit of promotion for my group Devious Minds today
so here are some links to our songs on youtube
Firstly "I Eat Hearts" a murderous horrorcore track with a subliminal personal/emotional twist to it
@ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HrtwfD8Mrjk
.. "Need Some Sleep" the title kinda explains it
@ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZeQvIFLyVsw
and lastly one of my solo tracks "Hardy Knuckles"
which is about someone who discovers their desrtuctive side from the voice in his head
@ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e0bI14irmuc
14 Mar 12 10:20 am poetry/lyric challenges
1st challenge
I am challenging anyone to construct a poetry/lyrical piece of some sort containing the 10 phrases that I have listed, record this and put it onto youtube as a response to this video and also challenge me to write a poem with 10 phrases/words of your choice
link to the vid of this challenge: http://youtu.be/G8bzGTJzWlU
the 10 phrases
Pharoah
Kurt Cobain
Red
Messenger
Bullet
Love wound
Myth
Truth
Demon
Mind breaker ... link to the song; http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VkK6uo6k55c
2nd challenge
If you are lyricist or poet and you're interested in being challenged then check this out. I want you to use the 5 phrases that I've listed in your response piece.
link to the vid of this challenge: http://youtu.be/OrydHOev1Fc
All of the phrases except the last one are from songs...
Phrases:
1. "I wanna fuck you like an animal" - Closer by Nine Inch Nails
2. "Touch me I'm sick" - Touch me I'm sick by Mudhoney
3. "Under my skin" - Under my skin by Frank Sinatra
4. "I wanna do bad things to you" Bad things by Jace Everett
5. "Opium of the people" Critique of Hegel's Philosophy of Right(book) by Karl Marx
As mentioned here are the links to the latest solo songs by members of Devious Minds
Intoxikie - The Pain
http://youtu.be/HVBPhyPY7-0
Widzdom - Judgement Day
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yBQLnkXnyVw
07 Mar 12 10:50 am My rap group - Devious Minds
Check out our music
Devious Minds - need some sleep
http://youtu.be/ZeQvIFLyVsw
Devious Minds - I eat hearts
http://youtu.be/HrtwfD8Mrjk
and if you like it you can find us on
youtube: http://www.youtube.com/user/DeviousMindsTV
facebook: http://www.facebook.com/DeviousMinds.HipHop
and
vampirefreaks: http://vampirefreaks.com/Devious_Minds
21 Feb 12 10:42 pm Poetry on youtube
Anyone on here got a youtube channel where they post poetry vids?? If so drop me the link to it and I'll check it out and subscribe to the channel if I like the poems.
Here's the link to my youtube channel if anyone wants to check it ;
www.youtube.com/user/TheIntoxikie
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