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So tell me my sweet...

So tell me my sweet, my darling dear
What would you say if God were here?

I'd tell him I love him
and thank him for his grace
I'd tell him the world is beautiful
and how it's amazing that he made this place
I'd marvel at the birds and the trees
and even though they scare me, the sharks and the bees.

I'd let him know how grateful i am
for my mom and my dad
And i know she's in heavan
but the death of my granma still makes me sad
I'd tell him im thankfull that he made the moon and the sun
and thankful that he listened and that my soccer team won.

But then I'd ask him because it worries me
Howcome he made people that cannot see
Why is it that some grown ups fight
And why do the monsters only come out at night
How can he watch when people are dying
And why can't he stop the man when the woman is crying.

I'd ask him how he can let bad men make all this war
And howcome he doesn't answer when some people call
I'd beg him to fix everything and make it all right
He shouldn't just watch as his people die in this fight...