Poem Comments

i dont want to lose you

My dream is to have you
Something so simple and true
Id idolize you from time to time
Just writing poems with rhymes
But I’m pouring out my heart
Because I love you and we shouldn’t be apart
I could say this and that and it wouldn’t matter
Because this world of course is on a silver platter
You are the only woman ill ever love
I would die for just to make you happy my dove
I want to fall asleep in your arms and wake up to that smile
This is something I’ve never thought of in a while
Tangled up in problems I haven’t been exactly there
Something we’ve talked I’ve showed I care
I really do care and I want to show it
But I never get the chance not even in the least bit
I just want to show you the meaning of my heart
Like I mentioned I really don’t want us to be apart
I’m not perfect and I beg for forgiveness
Without you things never are the same nevertheless
I feel like we’re losing a connection
And I feel as though I’ve lost all attention
I don’t mean to be a bother
I was under the impression we loved one another
I was a fool to think that and I understand
Now I sit and try to think of plan
You say you’ve been hurt before
I don’t want that happening anymore
But I feel that there’s a distance
And that the love I have needs assistance
I just don’t know what to do
Of course I’m going crazy without you
I love you whether rain or shine
Just dreaming of you is fine
Your love is so good I wish it was mine
But I can’t see it because it seems to be blind
I hate hiding my feelings I just want to let them show
I love you so much and I want you to know
I mean it’s a feeling that comes from within
I want you to know the love I am in
Sometimes I believe we should be one
Then imagine we’d have so much fun
If you take my hand you’ll see my girl
I guarantee you that we’d be in another world
See I wish raindrops were falling today
It would remind me of your beauty anyway
Your heart is a house of love
Why else would you be an angel from above
My love for you I can’t be denied
I really wish you could see the tears I cry
I just feel that we’ve both been away
But I want to solve this problem right way
Until my love stops singing
Ill just be here waiting hoping and dreaming for your love……………..

I love you
tommy12 thank you
14yrs