Poem Comments

i had nothing till i found you

So I’ve been running into my demise
Thinking and thinking ill get a good surprise
Little did I know my dreams weren’t shit
And my life was a mistake every last little bit
I fell in love from time to time
But they would hate me and my rhymes
My poems never meant a damn thing
Just as bad as when I use to sing
Surviving and surviving is what I’m saying
Looking at her and just chilling
I never had much and always got by
This time I’m just shedding a tear and starting to cry
Feeling loose and an empty vessel
Girls always telling me to get on their level
Only the strong survive in this world
And only the handsome boys get the girl
I’m just another rebel trying to find love
Looks like my reservation was cancelled above
Your smile and laugh has got me hypnotized
While those beautiful eyes got me mesmerized
Chillan and laughing that is what we do
And those problems you have we will get through
I want to feel your love surround me
And caress something so powerful you see
Hey girl there is no mystery
There is only love as far as I can see
Let me hold you tight
And let our love take flight
Put your feet up and kick it back
While we keep this relationship on track
This feels like a real live fantasy
But I’m attracted as though you’re my ecstasy
How in the hell did I meet a girl like you
Alright here it comes you ready for the truth
I feel like we really have something here
And I don’t want to lose it in fear
I want to keep it going strong
Because in the end there will be nothing wrong
angel you are the queen of this world
This is why I ask for you to be my girl
I’m your humble servant and you are my queen
I kneel to your everlasting beauty in this enchanting scene


You’re so beautiful….