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Not Long Ago(my pblished poem)

Withering slowly in autumn's care
living not long ago, in summer's air
the rose slowly falls, it crumbles and dies
to come in the spring, after the cotten blanket lies
the cold white covering, slowly melts away
bringing spring's flowers after the winter's day
xAcidxBitchx Beautiful poetry.

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CerraGrimm this is gorgeous. i love you're style
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Rawr1sh You are an amazing poet :]

I really enjoyed reading all of them :3

My favorite is would you (=
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