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Hospital Room

Sitting in the white room
With you layin' in the bed
With machines all around
Hooked up with no end
One breathing for you
Keeping you from passing away
Another on your chest
Counting the beats of your heart

Sitting in the white room
With you layin' in the bed
I hold your hand and say
"It will all be okay.
Just do me one thing.
Hold my hand to tell me,
That your okay."
You don't hold my hand
Meaning your slipping away

There you lie
In an endless sleep
Unable to breathe on your own
And unable to live by yourself
You may leave if you decide
But I want you to know this...
I'm a lie...
What I told you was a lie
The real truth is...
I love you

Sitting in the white room
With you layin' in the bed
Your heart's racing as I sit down
I Know whats coming and I'm prepared
You made your decision to leave
What two lives you had here
To leave your friends and family behind
To hurt the guy even more
You left him with a broken heart
And started killing him on the inside

Sitting in the white room
With your lifeless body layin' on the bed
Your breathing has stopped
And your heart beat has gone flat
I kiss your cold, lifeless lips
And whisper into your lifeless ear
"Goodbye my love, my life, my Kira.
I've loved you in the past,
I love you in the present,
And I will love you in the future.
I will love you forever, Kira.
Goodbye, My Love."
HunterHeartBreak I think this one is my favourite, i conected with it most, i love the amount of emotion in your poems.
11yrs