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Abused Angel

Abused Angel

The punches hurt,
The kicks are even worse.
The beatings never stop,
Neither do the tears.
All this pain,
For something so small.
I don't understand,
Why he hates us so much.
Finally he left our lifes,
But the scars stayed behind.
No one could help me,
Until my saviour came along.
The nightmares stopped,
And I was safe.
My saviour called me his Angel.
But how?
There's no such thing.
A beaten scarred abused Angel?

I couldn't stop him,
From hurting my Angel.
For years nothing was done,
He wasn't stopped soon enough.
But I've drawn the line,
He's caused too much pain.
Left too many scars,
He will never again touch her.
Never will he hurt her,
The girl I love.
My Abused Angel.

I wrote this for an English project but liked how it turned out. Thoughts?