*this one there were no changes to at all, this was the way it was written, but I'm glad because it's still one of my favourites and one I still read at poetry readings.*

...And so the deities brought forth decay.
and with the lunacy, screams out in pain.
denial of the sickest wishes,
defiled, the bastard innocent sisters.
and alone I broke, my spirits died as I unawoke.
ashes of the simply exiled.
stories unfold as though something untold,
Denied, the bitter angels cried.
My big betrayal, found inside,
I turn to you to tell you I love you, it's just a lie.
Alive inside, trickles of blood shows signs of my suicide.
False miseries given of hate,
Looking now it's your new fate.
Look around you, the world has died,
and it's shows signs that you're too late.