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Forth looming sickness ingloom

"I think most of you can get the point of this half way through it. that is if you aren't too dumb to figure it out. for those of you who don't get it leave a comment. and I'll personally send you a messege explaining what it's meaning is."

Hallowed dreams, like the sickness of a dying dream.
Through being alone, there's nothing more than hate to console my pain.
Worship false idols, but another reason I've come,
forth from the shadows. I've lost my mind!

Can you bring me forth through this pain that I feel?

I wake up bleeding with new scars on my body,
and once again, I find myself alone.
through suicide, I've seen the truth,
you hated me, while I loved you.

The rain is cold, and the dreams still flow.
but my mind went all deranged.
I awoke in a field ablaze, with no hope, of escape.
Simply put, that I died.

Can you forgive me and later on forget me?

The scars are there to remind me,
but only your face is there to guide me.
and your voice, makes tomorrow crumble.
and the way you looked at me, makes me feel like nothing.

There is no god!!! There's nothing out there anymore.
Depressing thoughts of another dying for the cause of me.
but I'm not worth dying for!!!

Give me my life back... YOU FUCKING WHORE!!!

I wake up bleeding with new scars on my body,
and once again, I find myself alone.
Through suicide, I've seen the truth,
you hated me and I hate you!!!
Fuck you!!!