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The Bridge (draft)

I am standing in the middle
and I am looking high above
there is no water below
there is no love above

I see past the stars
I see past the moon
there is nothing left
I will see you soon

Now in the the deep end
of my heart
I'm failing to see
what I could have done
is now leaving me

Something amiss
Strayed dreams of distance past
How long will I be here
If we are afraid to ask

(possible bridge)
Seems like the darkness
was right on time
And on the left is my broken mind

And in the middle of time
I can feel my mind
And if you don't mind
Do you have the time???