Poem Comments

not such as a poem but a cry

i need help i need someone to hold me and tell me things will be alright
let me know that the people that make this hole in my heart will go away
that you'll kiss me and take my nightmares away

will anyone talk to me!!!!

will anyone let me know whats going on with me why i'm such a fucking mistake to everyone i can feel
your knives piercing into my soul and tear through this paper i call flesh


i dont' want anyone but those who help

come to me running and be there to scare off those people and make sure that they stay at bay


and keep me warm at night please

talk to me..... i miss u guys... you know...the ones i call heroes...
lillesadist "your knives piercing into my soul and tear through this paper i call flesh."

Work of art! Good writing:)
15yrs