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This walk called life.

Intolerable emotion
Blinded by commotion
Mixed up and digested
Force fed by promotion
Actions around us screaming words
Words screaming action to be taken
Futile they'll be i'm not mistaken.

Forward, onwards
The trudge through words
Eternal and absurd
Avoid and be burned
Steps leading to steps
Whichever path they beget, to wonder
Is this right, if i'm going under.

Fast forward Future
And its all the same
Actions beget nothing
Nothing strives onwards
All we do is but in vain, we hope
Slim chance of gain, yet we trudge
This life, walk on and begrudge.

We lie, we steal,
Cheat and conceal
Feelings and emotions, hidden
Forbidden to those around us
Lest someone shall of found us,
Yet not us, we hide as we walk unbidden.

Onwards, upwards
Stalking in light, life
Hidden in brightness
Concealed to love, restricted from hate,
We do what we must, avoid the knife
Be what we must, in this walk called life.